I like this - Especially lines 5-8.
By bulkhead, im guessing you mean a covered entrance to a doorway rather than a walled section in the hold of a ship? - i like it either way. I had to look it up for the former meaning, i didnt know this use of the word so thanks for enlightening me.
My only quibble is I wouldn't use the word streetlife, but that's just my preference.
Good short sharp poem. Says much through ommission
Thanks, sisotowbel and Larry Did Ya Shovel the Snow Out from Under the Bulkhead Lark! I see what u mean about "streetlife" in L9. Hmmmm...what other word can be used to make it seem less redundant? Any ideas anyone? Peace! Starr
Nevermind. I changed "Streetlife is the way he lives" in L9 to "On the street is where he lives." I think it reads a bit better now. Thanks for your input though, folks!