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gifts from the gods
unknown

christmas lights
 1
flash in your rear view
 2
you know your caught
 3
after sixteen shots of tequila but
 4
he flies on by
 5
and the woman you fucked up the ass
 6
last night
 7
in the parking lot of the bar
 8
while your wedding ring was in the glove compartment
 9
you told her she was unique
 10
and she comes towards you and your wife right now
 11
as you push the baby stroller through the mall
 12
but she clicks right by
 13
without a flicker of recognition
 14

15 Feb 07

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PHEW!















(that was close)
 — chuckles

What a WOW of a poem. This is touched by greatness

Larry
 — larrylark

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