Good poem. I would like to be sitting at Lyle's bar right now.
Justin you certainly know how to grab the reader's attention, some great work in here
Not all that keen on L31 to L37
The last 3 stanzas can just about stand up by themselves, if you ever decide you don't want them anymore, i will give em a good home.
Congrats on getting some of your poems published.
F***ing smartass. ;)