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Ist lesson of the oracle
unknown

Necessity grabs you in a dream
 1
And squeezes you into an avocado salad
 2
Only the pure is real
 3
                but we must exist
 4
With the dross of this world
 5
 
 
The full moon drags you out, howling
 6
From your dull and maniac routine
 7
cup well river rain
 8
                the moisture in you eye
 9
what have these in common?
 10
 
 
Then you loins boil under some invisible flame
 11
A vessel you are emptiness containing all things
 12
Cold spider-web time
 13
                Delicate as rain drops glinting
 14
To betray the pane
 15
 
 
When will you discover the power
 16
To not know?
 17
A paper cup floats
 18
                on the lake, turns into a crane
 19
and flies away
 20

15 Feb 07


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Comments:

whoa...
doood
hehe
nifty words
the only thing i didn't much care fer was

L7 dull and maniac

other than that
pretty cool
 — chuckles

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