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Discord and Desperation
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Frustration mounts slowly, reaching an eventual crescendo,
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a din that fills the mind,
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an orchestra playing notes of discord,
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clamoring to drive one mad, demanding to be heard,
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music of pure desperation,
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consciousness gripping, attention held,
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bound to the sounds of insanity,
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while begging futiley to be freed.
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The instruments of destruction grow mockingly louder,
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a Chinese fingertrap that grows tighter as one struggles against it,
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until all circulation is cut off and that which is ensnared withers and dies.
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A man surrounded by friends,
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bitter at the world,
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resentful of those who mean him no harm,
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yet manage to tear at his essence,
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taking pieces of him,
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bit by bit,
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until there is nothing left but the parts that no one wants,
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that which has been buried underneath from conception,
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the qualities even the man himself was unaware of,
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the wretched, vile misgivings best left forgotten,
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doomed to bob just under the surface,
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the flotsam of a life wasted on quiet desperation,
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vaporized and inhaled for a moment of euphoria.
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14 Feb 07


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The emotion here is awesome
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nice.
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