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we rhythm
bellavida

To a choral anteroom it nudges
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from behind
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from above the binds of my flint prose
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it comes
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strumming sun
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light
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fingers on fluid skin
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furling amber honey red jouled through me
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I'm down
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Your algorithm
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ascends
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my still pale bone
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beckoning will
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cindering sandlewood curling
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weaving your prophesies up to here
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it summons me to
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the violet coil of polished oriel
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Oh my dear I'm lost in you
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In the silk steel canon of we becoming
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I dwell
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in smooth days where
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debussy paints staccatoed birds in fresh rainbow feathers
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and
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coltrane thunder
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flattens the fifth in blue jazz nights
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twirling
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resting
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pulsing in this hum
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14 Feb 07

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nice touch of coltrane inspiration here - lovely jazz art and abstraction into expressions of love

very nice
 — Mongrol

nice poem.
 — varun

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