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Rotting

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Bark skin Earths an	1
Army of fur wearing ants,	2
That travel the thick	3
Amorphous gravy.	4
Waddling like a duck	5
As hog-tied legs drag	6
Dumbly, a malignant head	7
Reeking of vinegar	8
and mildew.	9

13 Feb 07

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fur wearing ants
amorphous gravy

price of admission right there
neato
— chuckles

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