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Standing ovations for word vomit
Porcelain_Lo

You cannot fog my world
 1
with your words of hate and spite
 2
I can't feel sorry for you
 3
Even if my words weren't right.
 4
 
 
I never said a lie to you
 5
All your promises were false
 6
I won't hold out my hand
 7
Just to have it mauled
 8
 
 
I could end your pain right now
 9
Put you out of your misery
 10
But I'd rather wait and watch
 11
Until you can no longer breathe.
 12
 
 
I want you to lose it all in my hands
 13
and see what you've become
 14
Because through it all in the end
 15
I'll be the standing one.
 16

12 Feb 07


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