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roses through the glass
mranda34

Cut Off from the world
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Stuck inside a world where they don't belong
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Yet still beautiful
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They aren't quite the same
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No wind to comfort them
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No rain to quench their need
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Just there,
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Viewed, not cherrished.
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Dying as they live
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In their distorted glass world.
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Simply,
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roses through the glass.
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12 Feb 07

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Work on this...puh-lease. It's cliche as can be, is not too interesting or original. I will give you however the satisfaction of knowing that it is better than some of the stuff on this site. Keep writing. 7/10
 — Henry

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