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you're a liar
 1
self-proclaimed, at that
 2
 
 
your timing was almost amusing
 3
breaking me all the way through
 4
on the anniversary of my arrival
 5
 
 
to a loveless world
 6
 
 
I thought I'd make you my muse
 7
in a sad attempt to use you like
 8
 
 
you used me
 9
 
 
but, as it turns out, you're too shallow
 10
to write deep poetry about
 11

12 Feb 07


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You're the liar.
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