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cagebird, my soul is interupted
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She is this;
 1
the pair of legs
 2
the heart
 3
the ass
 4
nothing more you can say
 5
can make her anything more
 6
than what she is
 7
she is sorrow
 8
she is anger.
 9
she is in the place
 10
where men of centuries have lost
 11
their minds.
 12
And when it goes away
 13
it never comes back.
 14
when it is there
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you do not know it is there.
 16
Still you fantasize about it
 17
lose it
 18
put it off
 19
beg for it;
 20
men with their
 21
weird love
 22
crave for it.
 23
 
 
being careful with a woman
 24
is something
 25
you never learned
 26

12 Feb 07


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