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Valenti no
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Be my Valentine
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and I will love you
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for all time
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And evermore the sun
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will shine
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if you will be
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my Valentine
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But if perchance
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your lips are fired
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already by another
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Then I will take
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my broken heart
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for mending, back
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to mother.
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11 Feb 07

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for some reason this reminded me of the peom in 2 weeks notice. " a rolling stone gathers no moss, so you are leaving with your antacids and floss, but we perhaps are at a loss, because you are the worlds best boss".

again, i have no idea how they correlate, perhaps it was the rhyming.
 — sun_flower

I guess I should start writing for films. Ta , sf. :)
 — unknown

for some reason this reminded me of a poorly written poem about love.
 — Notecompsure

thanks for commenting, NoteC.
 — unknown

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