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Hot jean interview
unknown

In kick-flare, sky blue,
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the mirror loves you.
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One hot pair of jeans
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and you can grab your dreams.
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Or so you thought at 5.30am when you dressed
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for your interview feeling seriously un-stressed.
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10 Feb 07

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not too bad, but it feels sloppy, like you didn't really make an effort. Good overall idea.
 — bleach

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