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Hot jean interview

In kick-flare, sky blue,
the mirror loves you.
One hot pair of jeans
and you can grab your dreams.
Or so you thought at 5.30am when you dressed
for your interview feeling seriously un-stressed.

10 Feb 07

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not too bad, but it feels sloppy, like you didn't really make an effort. Good overall idea.
 — bleach