Lake |
violet
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wind unravels
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skeins of wing weary geese
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sky stains the water
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7 Feb 07 |
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i like your poem ... skein, nice.
— bettalpha
And again! Thank you very much!
— unknown
This is not a poem. It is just eleven words.
— MelissaK
Melissa - it is in the style of Japanese Haiku - Hokku
evocative of a season and moment in time.
I am sorry you did not enjoy the moment as much as I did.
— unknown
This is a fine poem. I enjoyed.
— bellavida
Haiku is not real poetry.
— pelican
Well, pelican said it - it must be so.
your arguments are so convincing
you've left me with no legs to stand on!
— unknown
You know where you can go.
— pelican
Well! That shut me up!
I don't think there can be any comeback for that one!
— unknown
You are a coward motherfucker who is afraid to show your name. You probably know that if I had your name I would find youi.
— pelican
My name is Eujanie Arthur Jones-McMahon
— unknown
I don't believe you, Asshole.
— pelican
Naturally not.
It would ruin your little trip.
— unknown
Prove it, Asshole.
— pelican
You prove it yourself every time you type something.
Your responses are getting more lame with each post.
— unknown
nice poem.
— varun
mind you, line 3 took my life.
— varun
If this rhymed you'd be on to something. 1/10
— Henry
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