poetry critical : poem

Lake

violet

wind unravels	1
skeins of wing weary geese	2
sky stains the water	3

7 Feb 07

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i like your poem ... skein, nice.
— bettalpha

And again! Thank you very much!
— unknown

This is not a poem. It is just eleven words.
— MelissaK

Melissa - it is in the style of Japanese Haiku - Hokku

evocative of a season and moment in time.

I am sorry you did not enjoy the moment as much as I did.
— unknown

This is a fine poem. I enjoyed.
— bellavida

Haiku is not real poetry.
— pelican

Well, pelican said it - it must be so.
your arguments are so convincing
you've left me with no legs to stand on!
— unknown

You know where you can go.
— pelican

Well! That shut me up!
I don't think there can be any comeback for that one!
— unknown

You are a coward motherfucker who is afraid to show your name. You probably know that if I had your name I would find youi.
— pelican

My name is Eujanie Arthur Jones-McMahon
— unknown

I don't believe you, Asshole.
— pelican

Naturally not.

It would ruin your little trip.
— unknown

Prove it, Asshole.
— pelican

You prove it yourself every time you type something.
Your responses are getting more lame with each post.
— unknown

nice poem.
— varun

mind you, line 3 took my life.
— varun

If this rhymed you'd be on to something. 1/10
— Henry

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