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on pink sweater days,
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when facing oncoming
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attractive company,
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she would often
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cock her head
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to well-attired mannequins
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to savor the reflections
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of suitors' chasing
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smiles
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5 Feb 07 |
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Oh, winsome and cute!
— Isabelle5
how did you know that i always do that, beyonce?
— unknown
why doesnt this chick just buy a mirror, and love herself?
— unknown
because mirrors are sooo 90s.
— unknown
LOL
morals are so 50s
fittycent
— unknown
why buy a mirror?
because we enjoy being objects sometimes. the rush of bobbing up and down in someone else's consciousness is happiness.
do u think of yourself while masturbating? and if u do please unlist your #
— unknown
looking indirectly often heightens the sensation of savoring. Perhaps by purifying the intentions of the event.
ww
— unknown
not to be a grammar geek but should well attired be well-attired (hyphenated). is L1 really necessary? overall it was cute, but a little wordy for a cute poem. but I could really 'see' it, so nice use of imagery in constructing a character.
— marshponds
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