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the reason why i read my own poems
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i am forty
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forty-one
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last night i met a girl.
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her name was aloha.
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i said aloha aloha.
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3 Feb 07

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you should keep on reading your own poems
 — unknown

hello goodbye?

this works. nice job.
 — rosemary

short....I don't quite understand it. A one night stand or something??? good job though
 — vida

probobobabilly
the same reason i
read my own "poems"
aloha.
 — chuckles

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