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shifting weights
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lock, release
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overheat
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till fused
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sex

30 Jan 07

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oh god oh god oh god oh oh
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ha
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not sure about this - anyone?
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you lost me, if you overheat then the solder won't take.
retitle it 'poor connections'
better still, tear the whole thing down and start again
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Is this a poem? Or is it just seven words?
 — MelissaK

this poem is about sex.
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Getting rid of solder was good, now i understand it
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shifting weights
join, release
on heat
till fused
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blahblahblah
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It's just seven words, Melissa.
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lol
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