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this feeling
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My, heart pounds with every single breath that i take
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This, love is forbidden but this is a risk I'm willing to make
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He filled my heart with joy, laughter and pure bliss
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Never in a million years had i imagined a feeling like this
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Because you see this boy came from out of the blue
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He confided in me,cared for me,my feelings for him grew
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Over and Over i told myself this cant be true
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But boy, the way i feel inside...its all because of you
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You've made me forget about painful memories in my past.
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Things you said i would never forget.I'm hoping this could last.
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But Since you;re leaving soon theres not much left to say
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I just wanted to tell you this,and maybe i will talk to u again one day
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26 Jan 07


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