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I switch sides
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of my bed
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every night
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so that I'll wake
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to a different nobody
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every morning
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26 Jan 07 |
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I think the title should be "Sleeping Around."
- kidding
Really like this.
— tillmorgan
wicked poem
— varun
suggestion:
I switch sides
on my bed
every night
so I awaken
to a different no one
every morning
— varun
to a different
no body
every morning
— unknown
I like this one
I agree with the "nobody"-"no body" change though, it gives the poem more depth
— sparrow
ouch. however, i like this sentiment and it is valid for a poem. sometimes you don't have to say much to make your point.
— aforbing
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