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Panacea
bowiegirl

In a world full of sorrows
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I made a vow
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to make my own
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a scented lavender
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paper fools read
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it over on either side
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and make believe an
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any-day renegade is
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what saves.
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Deep in a dream
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an artic echo beams:
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Tears are wet skin
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breathing is optional
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smiles are fortune
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and dissapearing
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is possible
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in electric endings
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like this.
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23 Jan 07


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Comments:

hmmm
some spelling:
L11 arctic
L15 disappearing
pretty cool sound to this except for
L11 an arctic echo beams (i'm not sure what you mean by this, but echo gives
mind to waves, as that is the nature of how sound works. beams denotes, to me,
straight lines, as in light, and how it travels)

anyhooo
well done
 — chuckles

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