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daytime forever
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he bursts in;
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quickly
 2
sits next to me,
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brimming with
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his big
 5
here-it-comes:
 6
 
 
'hey man check
 7
this out i
 8
got this idea
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you know how i
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always say
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if it'd just
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stay
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daytime forever
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then it'd be
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a better
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world
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well now i
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know how to do
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it
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my friend
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jeremy said
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hypothetically
 23
we could all get
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a rocket and
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go around the
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equator real
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fast
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and if we
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went around
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once everyday then
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it'd always
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stay
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the same
 34
time
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i think maybe noon
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would be best'
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22 Jan 07


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