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swan song to a bitter misunderstanding
unknown

i feel sickly,
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rushing out of this unfamiliar room
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   with my quickly- gathered clothes
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and i
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   painfully
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  avoid your siren-esque, eloquent
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orations of romance,
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  or whatever you call this false temporary garbage.
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and i tune up the heartless indifference,
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   i was there when no one else was?
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well, baby isn't it more of a mishap:
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   i imprisoned in the maddest
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calls of the madcap
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   and i trapped in something even more
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desperate than love-thirsty?
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well, baby, you love me?
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    i laugh, sans comment.
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good-bye
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   finally (for the first time)
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to what merely compares to an uh-oh one night stand.
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as i sigh from my parted lips,
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    you fucking asshole.
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22 Jan 07


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