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cigarettes with strangers
theair

funny how
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I mean it's funny how
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these things happen.
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I don't even smoke and I was having
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I was having a cigarette.
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she came out
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I mean like she came out
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like she was being tailed
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tailed by a rain cloud.
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she didn't even have one arm
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like one arm through her coat sleeve
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when she asked for a light.
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I lit it her cig
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I mean I lit her cigarette and nodded.
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I kept quiet because like
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because like she seemed disinterested.
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but out of the blue she was like
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so are you gonna buy me a drink?
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I flicked my cig at the sky and asked
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I mean I asked like
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how about  
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how about a sex
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how about a sex
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and she flicked her cig
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I mean she flicked her cig at my eye.
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I mean like how about a sex
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a sex on the beach? I asked
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but I mean
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I mean she was already gone.
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thanks to M.S. for his voice

21 Jan 07

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Stuttering problem or crackhead?

It's pretty humorous.
Sometimes, though, the repitition became a bit tiresome.
But at the end I was pleased.

Rixes.
 — unknown

yeah, this is in the voice of a friend of mine with a bad stutter, although who knows, maybe he's into crack too?

thanks for reading.
 — theair

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