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COKE
cindy28

I hate myself
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So I do COKE
 2
It makes my mind feel good
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I forget I love you
 4
COKE Clears my mind
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Feelings  hidden
 6
Dark lonely place
 7
Why did I think of you
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COKE OUT on a line
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Makes me drive in a straight line
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UP my nose or Should I have a cold one
 11
Could I die
 12
Maybe it’s time
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To be COKE out of my mind
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Can you tell it in my eyes
 15
That White makes them shine
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Or flip back where I ca n see the devil alive
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I’ve been sober
 18
But my demons still ponder inside
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Could I be COKE out for a long time
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21 Jan 07

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Lines like this ("I hate myself so I do coke") make this too-straight forward to sound like a poem. I've read alot of poetry from ex-drug-addicts that's really well written, but this sounds almost like a statement given at an NA-meeting. Just my opinion.
 — DICE

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