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Minus
intract

In the steel ice mist
 1
that frozen world
 2
that somehow sits
 3
lingering in frozen breaths
 4
shrouded in a cold blue mist
 5
frigid like stone
 6
statuette snowmen
 7
sentinels
 8
melting in the morning
 9
early morning misted dew light
 10
settling like falling snowflakes
 11
melting angels
 12
winged teardrops
 13
twinkling in the early morning light
 14
frosted snowflakes falling
 15
statuette snowmen
 16
sentinels
 17
melting in the morning
 18
the early light
 19
that somehow waits
 20
in a blue steel
 21
frozen cold
 22
ice mist...
 23
 
 
KH.
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20 Jan 07


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you leave me out in the cold. it feels too much like a list.

but that list is good at its emphasis. this one's hard to understand, hard to see where you're going.

i'm too confused.
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