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Earlier, a youngish man of sixty-two
had told of 10 young boys who went hairless
able and ready with arms, but no hair.
And at that moment,
I told the table that
Chihuahuas were also hairless,
but they didn’t have to go to war.

19 Jan 07

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why the repetition of the hairlessness?

nice pome.
 — varun

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