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inertia
unknown

scheme for attention,
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rally against
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metasteses
 3
of redundancy,
 4
break suffocating
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silences with
 6
symbolizations -
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prayers
 8
for reciprocation
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and when it comes,
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keep resuscitating
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you
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as much as you can
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until your agency
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is cancelled,
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and you are left
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suspended
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in an
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atmosphere
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of unilateral
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dread
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14 Jan 07


(define the words in this poem)



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no music
need words connect
short write
make
annoying read

dictionary words
detract
not impress.
 — unknown

no synapses
in  head
short circuited
by cheap
weed

digress
when words
make
no sense-
try
pictionary
 — unknown

as a horny illiterate and dyslexic, i read this first as penis 4skin  but now i see what u mean so i am happy.

wookiewwakkee
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harsh ahh ahhh
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Pictionary would be an improvement, it has imagery.
 — unknown

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