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Hungry, Hungry Heartstrings
unknown

I'm getting used to
 1
you using youthful
 2
excuses to be untruthful.
 3
I understand where
 4
you're going,
 5
but not quite where
 6
you're coming from.
 7
 
 
It's quiet.
 8
I'm falling ill at the wheel.
 9
All jokes aside,
 10
I wish you'd look past the past.
 11

This isn't finished, I just needed somewhere to keep it written until I'm ready.

9 Jan 07


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