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god does not exist
unknown

if there were
 1
a god i would
 2
believe in him
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9 Jan 07

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A thought not a poem and a bleak one at that.
 — marieF

if there was
a god you would
believe in her
 — unknown

god i would
do her
 — unknown

there is a God.

        -In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth.-
            ;          &nbs p;          ~Ge nesis 1:1
 — jesussgurl

it is written on the public loo wall "god f*cks sheep - genesis 1:101" so it is written, so it must be true.
 — unknown

Apparently not.
 — Isabelle5

I second what marieF said.
 — stateofmind

your wrong there is a God
 — shortee

It's good to see that objectivity is alive and well at PC.


Every comment above has been purely opinion.

No substance, like your god.
 — unknown

Oh. What does that make this poem then? It is also an opinion with no substance.
 — marieF

Maybe the title should be "My god does not exist," that way you won't be offending anyone and it can be your own private fact.
 — unknown

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