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The party
aerol

right where i came in
 1
wank-o-rama of minced meat
 2
fingers made of tin
 3
 
 
this one moon unit, graying hair
 4
forlorn aviation
 5
somebody came by and said:
 6
 
 
"would you like some tasty granite
 7
i have a feeling you'd enjoy some ammonium nitrate"
 8
 
 
shapes of metal they'd wear on their heads
 9
i remember seeing it again
 10
like a tinfoil dream collage
 11
 
 
left a crunchy aftertaste
 12
spinning cones of smiles
 13
interrupted
 14
 
 
what in sonar's awful name
 15
heavens
 16
what a mess
 17
 
 
i remember how i dressed:
 18
stereophonic space cadet
 19

2004

7 Jan 07


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 — aerol

wank-o-rama

that's great.
 — chuckles

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