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my thoughts as i watch cops
bear

when i see a man
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of the law driving
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down the street with
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his sirens wailing
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i think:
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"catch that motherfucker
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who is making america unsafe
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i'm rooting for you pig!"
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i hope the cops catch
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everyone they are going after
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because that means they
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are not bothering me.
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7 Jan 07

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Deep.
 — unknown

HAHAHAHA.

A 10, just for the laugh.
 — aurelius

thanks
 — bear

heh, this is true!
 — ducktape

HAHAHAHAHAHA!  I should send this to all the cops in my family.  
 — Isabelle5

Profundity wrapped up in a simple observation.
 — larrylark

I'd reconsider 'are not' in the last line. Strikes me as a bit awkward.
 — stateofmind

I agree with the 'they are' being clumsy at the end, but it made me smile.
 — opal

splendid, witiful
 — john_daker

cheers
 — bear

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