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met history's exit
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in a black
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winter coat
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-unflinched by fate-
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served to taunts
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from shadow throats,
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cursed the world
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&
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dropped
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4 Jan 07 |
Rated 8.7 (8.7) by 3 users.
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wore a black
winter coat to
history's finale-
unflinched
by fate-
stationed amidst
shadows of threats
and taunts,
cursed the world
and dropped.
— varun
rid your self of footnote.
— varun
thanks points taken!
— unknown
here's yer title:
hangdog
yer welcome...
— chuckles
i was thinking
snap cackle plop
— unknown
can't you spruce it up and make it happy?
— unknown
Oh, my gosh, the comments made me laugh
and then shiver at my momentary lack of compassion and humanity.
— Isabelle5
Oh good. V good. Might be good to add a prelude to it. v v sad too. I do like it.
sangria
— unknown
isabelle has always made americans look more stupid than they appear
— unknown
a dedication to borat in a winter's coat
wakeewookoo
— unknown
short and effective does not take sides and shows the lack of humanity on both ends.
— unknown
great examination of a very difficult topic... goodstuff
— modern_nomad
happy holeeeeeeeedays
— unknown
i wonder, was that coat a Donna? if so was it this season's or last? that woul d really change the mood of this poem.
ms. whitley if ur nasty
— unknown
awesome
double aa
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jody whatley witley
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axis = one of bush's evil
axis = neck
nice twist saddam
— unknown
i loved it.
— unknown
lol funny
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rip saddam
— unknown
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