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when i get married
i'll grow a huge beard
and let my friend
comment on it,
casually use it to make
and so repay my debt


28 Dec 06

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this is for when he asked you "don't you think my beard makes me look wise?"
 — mikebauer

 — kronah_kcmg

debt of bad conversation?
 — SweetPain

i dont quite get this, please explain. D
 — SweetPain

i dont quite get this, please explain. D
— SweetPain

what did you think of what you did quite get though? it's a poem and it might have a meaning that the author didn't no, and only u have the clue and key... what do you think it's about and did he write it without fukking it up??
 — mikebauer

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