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Fido
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The cheery little pal
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told Hal
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that he needed to calm down.
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The message was obvious, the yap,
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but in a state of rage such ease of notice
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can go undetected.
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The puppy had seen the girl before,
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recognized by smell,
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and when she slapped his master
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Fido almost panicked.
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But lucky for Hal
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his pal was quick to see that hell
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would go unleashed on the cheeks of the gal
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if the meeting wasn't bitten two,
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so in all desperation
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Fido chewed what his master had forbidden
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and the girl was spared.
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22 Dec 06


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this poem is stupid. but i need some suggestions to rewrite this so it is a better circumstance of loyalty without just spelling the obvious. if anything it is a boring story.
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