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concept poem from a dream #1
gnormal

as is usual in cases like this
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the ruling of the court was disregarded
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and the defendant was forced to complete the act
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thereby bringing the full weight of the karma upon himself.
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29 Oct 06

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needs a monkey
 — chuckles

"it's an implicit monkey!" gnormal chuckles
 — gnormal

Thought provoking. Nice job.
 — Unbelievable

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