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not everything makes sense
gnormal

when the 3 guys come riding
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up one fake sick
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and get chance at a disadvantage unable
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to reach his shotgun they didnt
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know that colorado was just
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inside with that card-playing lady.
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take that flowerpot and throw it
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through the window,
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he told her.
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duck after you throw it.
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then he walked right out on the front
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porch like he didnt
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know what was happening.  then
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that lady threw the pot and it crashed
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out the window providing a distraction during
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which colorado chucked chance
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the shotgun and together they shot
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the 3 guys.
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but how come colorado didnt
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just shoot those guys through
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the window?  he could have
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got them all for sure.  
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colorado could sing like ricky
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nelson, and he was a really good shot too.
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16 Oct 06

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i love these words

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