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not everything makes sense

when the 3 guys come riding
up one fake sick
and get chance at a disadvantage unable
to reach his shotgun they didnt
know that colorado was just
inside with that card-playing lady.
take that flowerpot and throw it
through the window,
he told her.
duck after you throw it.
then he walked right out on the front
porch like he didnt
know what was happening.  then
that lady threw the pot and it crashed
out the window providing a distraction during
which colorado chucked chance
the shotgun and together they shot
the 3 guys.
but how come colorado didnt
just shoot those guys through
the window?  he could have
got them all for sure.  
colorado could sing like ricky
nelson, and he was a really good shot too.

16 Oct 06

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