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Children for Prophet
crepaway

Maya soldiers
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comeback homeless
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from killing the poor
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in a war for freedom
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that expired in WWII.
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And the merciless
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become leaders
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waking to
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Aztec sunrise..
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15 Aug 06

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good, but it seems like it needs more. maybe elaborate the ellipses.
 — livella

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