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Pound for Pound
crepaway

How many times can Ezra
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go insane  
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before
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one
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Image:
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Modern;
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the gap between toy guns
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and real guns Is.
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But how many times can misery
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reincarnate
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before
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one
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Dollar Poem.
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30 Jul 06

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Too abstract for me.  Either that or is doesn't make sense.
 — propoet50

sorry it is what it is
unapologetic natural consequence  
falling into trap

tha\nk you propoet50
 — crepaway

Mel Gibson will not like this poem
 — unknown

this is great
 — unknown

me don' t get it neither!
 — unknown

Clever , I like the abstraction actualy , comparing a missle that carries 100 Kg of explosives to lazor guided missles that cary 23 tons of explosives is the gap and is not equal pound for pound.
 — unknown

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