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Igneus and rock
aerol

He's walking his rock.
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He steps and it trots.
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It just loves cavorting,
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when it's feeling crunchy.
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But if it trips, and rolls, and rumbles,
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you better watch out then.
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Hey, look at them walk;
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just Igneus and rock.
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2005

14 Jul 06

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If this is an attempt at humor, it's falling sadly short of the mark.  
 — Isabelle5

Aerol?  What a surprise!  
 — Isabelle5

i'm afraid it's not a funny, but what's the surprising part?
 — aerol

its okay, a little different which is refreshing, but just wide of the mark I feel...
 — icepineapple

are you stoned? there i think i'm right on the mark
 — unknown

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