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Igneus and rock

He's walking his rock.
He steps and it trots.
It just loves cavorting,
when it's feeling crunchy.
But if it trips, and rolls, and rumbles,
you better watch out then.
Hey, look at them walk;
just Igneus and rock.


14 Jul 06

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