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Graffiti
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And you turmoil
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from rooms outside your walls  
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without a face
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asking where is my face
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saying baby things like
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don’t tell me where to go
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tell me where to go
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walk…
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and you leave your hands at the door
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fuddling for an embrace  
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in a forgotten landscape
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missing people
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now city
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cars
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freeways
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transmission
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saying baby things like
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don’t tell where to go
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tell me where to go
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walk…and you’re heard
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by the Suck
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the Washed
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on the Write of cardboard boxes  
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hanging from vagrants
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without a face
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asking where is my face
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from rooms outside your walls
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and you turmoil
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20 Jun 06

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This could make a great song
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the imagery is amazing it almost reminds me of the struggle between thorsitas and montagru and how the food didn't appease the needs of their people and their thoughts were too extravagant for the kingdom so chaos and turmoil reigns plundering the entire city into a tornado whirpool of death and destruction
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dark beauty. mixed passion and feeling that takes the reader to an entirely new stage of emotions. im entranced.
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ageism.
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