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The Intensity of MARS on a Blind Musician
greylin

Michael Johnson
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Crazy, I know.
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What made me stop and think,
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When he wouldn't let me leave without a hello?
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At least three days it's been.
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And now story ideas flush through my brain:
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What would be?
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What could be?
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If two seperatly engaged people
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Came together to commmit a sin
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Brought about in a high school fantasy.
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What if a new history were written,
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Bringing them closer together
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Than just a memory,
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Or a seating partner of past.
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If all the negatives that tore them apart
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Were all the positives meant to bring them together.
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Fear and Hope and Prior Commitments.
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But what if this were the chance
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my younger self was too afraid to take.
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17 Jun 06


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