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SNAP!
crepaway

1. Buckaroo alive.
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Yes -  
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My yes has an age of a bell,
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my leg stomps’ the ground,
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a 2 ton Bronze.
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I salute your influence
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like my influence,
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you motivate me,
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I motivate you.
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My boots, your boundary
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I follow like a poem of yeses
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that make your head ring:
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My country My rifle My wife and children.
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My goal.
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Sir.
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I have the Yes in me, flattened history.
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2. Buckaroo dead.
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Final man snaps with the need
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to give to the gods, or purpose.
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he now needs to appease
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the Skyscrapers.
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I stomp the ground, Minotaur
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5 Jun 06

Rated 6.3 (8.5) by 3 users.
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oh snap! I really liked this. Very nice indeed.
 — bluejay25

Pigeon man follows the Bluejay.  This IS excellent poetry.  The images are really crisp.  Like cutting into an apple.  I salute your influence too.
 — starr

Good poem.
 — unknown

I don't understand. Can I please have a comprehensive guide?
 — unknown

its a commentary on the universal soldier
 — unknown

wow! this is really good!
 — popyelle

like this.
 — listen

Snap. Thanks.
 — crepaway

I really rate this, good poem.
 — unknown

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