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I Guess
britt85

I can give all I can...  
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I don't even have to force my heart  
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to quicken the love  
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And it can be full  
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And you can take it..  
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If you want.  
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You always know where I stand  
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With my words and some  
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I never push … only pull  
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    and I hope you’re never able to shake this..  
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You know,  
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When I’m thinking of you?  
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I could never be more happier..  
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I honestly feel my heart swell  
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And spill out all over everybody  
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And they know.........  
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                          they all know.  
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I watch my cigarette ash away..  
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Never enough nicotine  
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to brighten my day!  
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I take the fresh air into my lungs  
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And I can't taste it  
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A sort of torture I think  
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God..I can’t stop smoking  
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     GOD..I need a Drink  
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And all these eerie agents  
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So bluntly profound  
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In detecting my disease  
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Tiptoeing around  
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these wielding trees  
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I am reminded to hide myself  
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Once again.. with you  
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Not really ever denying  
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              YoU  
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I jus’…..  
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    Stare at my shoes  
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Because …JesuS!!!  
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  MY FACE…..  39
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         My FACE shows its True..  
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Still it’s hard…  
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Never enough sighs to feel me up..  
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Not even enough-  
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                              To make me sink  
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Deeper into my decision to give up..  
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But promises aren’t going to be broken  
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So I guess I’ll keep..  
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Keep waiting on you…  
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………………………Oh,…  50
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And here you are walking towards me. :)
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27 May 06


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