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Never Could Get that Last String
TheHarlequin

Tuning my guitar
 1
By ear
 2
With a worn pick
 3
Turning tuners with
 4
s   l   o   w
 5
Repetitive
 6
Repetitive
 7
uNcErTaInTy
 8
Three brass
 9
Coils
 10
Lay the
 11
Foundation
 12
For the
 13
Melodic Master Plan
 14
Of my guitar
 15
Steel strings
 16
Forebodingly thin
 17
Delicate
 18
In tuning and appearance
 19
If not tuned carefully
 20
Cry the baleful ballade
 21
Of wasted work
 22
Due to
 23
Insignificant effort
 24
On the part of the
 25
Would be
 26
Musician
 27
Finally
 28
The last string
 29
Find the right fret
 30
It all comes down to this
 31
Metronomic balance
 32
Rests upon the fragile finality
 33
Of the last string
 34
Just a little tighter…
 35
Still not there…
 36
Just a little more…
 37
Almo-
 38
TWANG
 39
Never could get that last string.
 40

29 Mar 06

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My 'G' string is always the one that snaps on my guitar.  It's a shit, no doubt about it..
 — CervusWright

heh. G-string.

Anyway.

The high E must die.

I never use it anyway.
 — povertea

My A always snaps.
 — the_recluse

amen povertea

i'm mainly a drummer though
 — TheHarlequin

I've never had a guitar string snap on me. But once, when I was younger, I had the E string from my violin snap and pop my face. It hurt like hell.
 — wanderlusted

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