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let me know what you guys think forget about spelling it was done quickly in rage but here it is a nd o its a son g let me know what you think with a commetn or rating

on this side of the grass
 1
when it rains it pours
 2
u never know what to do
 3
life seems like it has no purpose
 4
u want everthing to be gone in one slice
 5
 
 
her leaving
 6
me and her just friends but
 7
it seems like more
 8
it kills me like a dagger through the heart
 9
over and over again never stopping
 10
 
 
on this side of the grass
 11
when it rains it pours
 12
u never know what to do
 13
life seems like it has no purpose
 14
u want everthing to be gone in one slice
 15
 
 
her deciding to be just friends
 16
really topped it all
 17
it was the acid on the blade in my heart
 18
eating at my insides with every stab
 19
it hope this ends soon
 20
i cant take much more
 21
 
 
on this side of the grass
 22
when it rains it pours
 23
u never know what to do
 24
life seems like it has no purpose
 25
u want everthing to be gone in one slice
 26
 
 
i cant help it
 27
this cant be stopped
 28
my love for her and great attraction to her
 29
is the leading to this end
 30
sitting alone
 31
screaming till my thourght is sore
 32
 
 
on this side of the grass
 33
when it rains it pours
 34
u never know what to do
 35
life seems like it has no purpose
 36
u want everthing to be gone in one slice
 37

11 Dec 05

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i get the message... but it's not really moving for me...sorry...
 — loveart416

I decided not to read the poem at all I could not get through the inane comment.
Why anyone would post anything with spell checking it at least - much less reading it over is beyond my ken.
Have a little respect for yourself and the rest of us.
Don't waste our time.
 — unknown

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