i like the way this reads now. thanks varun.
i like your style very much. i have read a few of your poems,.....and like them all for what they were. u set aside rhythm and structure (not that u dont have it)...u seem to focus on whats really important,......emotion.
emotional appeal is my favorite type of writing i think. not the sentimental junk ... just a different viewpoint on emotion, or perhaps a completely different emotion all together ...