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go out dancing
gnormal

we can "go out
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dancing" or we can dance!
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but if we're going to go
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out lets go out
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dancing.
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5 Nov 05


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catchy, to say the least, and not only the line breaks.  
Did you go out dancing in the end?
Maria
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go out dancing also mean . . . die dancing? you know like "if we're gonna go down, we'll go down fighting"? just a thought. if not, then i'm just reading strange things into a simple poem like normal. either way, it got me thinking about play-on-word type stuff, and that's always cool.
 — unknown

this is cute.
 — SweetPain

if you can't dance
take off your pants

is what I always say.
 — wendz

go out dancing
as in die ( and why not?)
 — unknown

needs a diff title

how bout: the chalky cliffs of dover

?


Liza
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i think your reading in to things ,are you mental
 — daniellive

are you 12?
 — unknown

i believe this has happened many times to youths in israel
 — unknown

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