| Its No "Carolina In My Mind" |
green_book
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You left me hanging like a picture in the hall,
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you left me hanging 'round,
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waiting for your call.
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I'm making best friends with your answering machine,
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It makes me wish you were,
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the girl I'd never seen.
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Each day seems to get harder as I go,
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I might be glad I met you,
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but I hate the things I know.
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23 Jun 05 |
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Love L 4... had a few of those kinds of girls in my life. well done.
— Evernight
Like the title. nothing else. sorry.
— unknown
l5 *wish- not a bad poem, but not incredibly interesting.
— Cloudless
harsh weird different a slightly newer poet type of poem
— speech_less
I'm the same as the 2nd comment.
— meaka
I like the meaning and the last verse is wonderful, but the poem has a kinda forced rhyme to it which undermines the meaning of it. work on it and it could be great
— ForeverAlone
its alright
— unknown
Amusing.
— unknown
i like this, it's sweet, I can just hear the sothern accent in the way the poem flows :-)
— sparrow
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