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tiedtoes
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Trick mirrors all in a row
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Mind fuck you just for show
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Addiction has withered you so
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19 Jun 05 |
Rated 9.3 (7.3) by 6 users.
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so sad. so true
— themolly
i think i know who you're talking about. whoa.
— Estrella
this gets a 1 from me, themollys friend.
— unknown
without fail someone will come along to continue the ffffeud
— unknown
Wow, short and sharp. Like a needle's sting...
— Isabelle5
three lines of nothing from tiedtoes
by a no-talent writer and it sure shows.
damn this poem really blows!
— unknown
oh man! why do people have to stone me for being a friend? that hurts, man. ouch!
— tiedtoes
It's short and sharp, could be a bit more, but overall good.
— Gabriella
I Love This!
— BoundFeet
garbage.
— unknown
FANTASTIC POEM!
— Wix
Thanks! I really appreciate it.
— tiedtoes
I really like the title of this.
— unknown
Thank you. I like the title as well.
— tiedtoes
I hope you are not endorsing such actions. It certainly happens, as does karmic justice. Wow title.
— C
That title does rock. How'd you come up with it?
— unknown
Wow. Just Wow.
— unknown
I don't know where I got the title. I was thinking of trick mirrors like liquid...morphing and twisting....falling apart into sand. I don't know......
— tiedtoes
This is my least favorite piece I've put on this site, and it has my best rating. Why is life so f-ed up?
— tiedtoes
childish to solve things?
— Kauf
huh?
— tiedtoes
I was with you until the f-word. Good, though.
— unknown
Can you think of anything that could replace it without losing the umph?
— unknown
hello?
— tiedtoes
what instead of the f-word? You can't say that and offer no suggestion! Come on.
— tiedtoes
pricks? beats? slaps? i'm not sure. "fuck" just has too many negative connotations for this poem.
— unknown
well this poem is about being ravaged by addiction, so I think negativity fits nicely.
— unknown
not the fuck kind of negativity.
— Hear
you have obviously never been an addict.
Good for you.
— unknown
I'm addicted to writing.
-Hear
— unknown
how quaint...addicted to writing.
— unknown
mirrors can do some craZZZZZZZZZy thangs, y'all.
— unknown
here is a good idea:
try blinking really fast in front of a mirror for 3 minutes straight
feel your brain strobe dn watch your nose climb.
cp
— unknown
whoa. that sounds scary.
— tiedtoes
i'm so tired of unkown people being bitches and commenting on something and then not being brave enough to put names to their comments it's a good a poem. I'm jsut saying why don't they post their stuff, it's because they can't take the critism
— freedaspace
thanks man
— tiedtoes
i don't know who it's about but i like it anyways!
— tomorrow
it's about a stripper friend of mine...
— tiedtoes
damn those trick mirrors. "fun house" ? more like whore house
— unknown
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