poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Our Guts on The Gods >{metallic spectrum edit}<
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I will be rattled pink vixen with red-hot hands, gray spiraling eyes working overtime.
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Come - try to overlook me and my friends, yellow to most - your cloaked beacons.
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                    The amber glow of you
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                    halos the room,
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           like a metallic reflection of The Gods.
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                    The visible sounds do
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                          spout from you
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             into the azure waters of Our Guts.
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A black altar in the bathroom = A white shrine in the sky.
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      Cross your legs < or < kneel and beg.
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                Hold a bead on the eye.
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Pretty maidens
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all in a row
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will blood flood you
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for our very last show.
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